Friday, May 16, 2008

If I live in other nation

What would my typical day be like if I live in other country

What would my typical day be like, if I live in Philippine?
After my retirement, it is very important for me to decide where to live and how to spend retired life, because it will be the second round of my life like turning a page.
I want to live in Philippine after retirement. If I live there, I can enjoy comfortable life with financial stability and free myself from complicated life of seoul.
In the morning, I will get up early and pray for God first of all. If I get up late, I may be lazy. And I will take a walk breathing fresh air along the beach. After coming back home, I will take a breakfast with family reading a newspaper for korean residents. The menu of the Breakfast will be a fresh fish food and desert is fruit, such as mango, pineapple. There are plentiful fish and fruit in Philippine. After breakfast, I will talk about some interesting things with family in the living room.
In the forenoon, I will enjoy a exciting hobby, such as swimming, reading, cultivating garden, refting, fishing, diving, etc. I can expect many hobby activities, which I couldn't do in Korea, there.
In the afternoon, I will attend to several kinds of social meeting or will offer sacrifices for people who need the help, belonging to organization for service or mission. I will be familier with native people and can understand their culture through attending social meeting. Activity of the service for the poor will give me meaning of the life. As a result of these activities, I can live there as complete philippian.
In the evening, I will go shopping mall or take a relax watching TV. Sometimes, I will spend time at small party with family, friends and neighbors.
At night, I will communicate relatives and friends who live in Korea through computer. Then, after praying for God, I will go to the bed.
It is a new challenge to live in other nation. But It is worth to challenge even though many expected difficulties, because the possibility of the happy silver life is higher in Philippine than in Korea. I expect life in Philippine as I can enjoy many spare time and abundant life that I can't have in Korea because of the economical reason. It also looks like a rosy future.

1 comment:

Son-Mee Kwon said...

1. You are expressing cleary the hypothetical situation that you will be able to live in Philippine after retirement. The topic sentence, body paragraphs and conclusion are well organized and your daily life in Philippine is described in detail.

2. But I'd like to comment regarding some vague expressions and misspells
1) If I live there, I can enjoy comfortable life ~
: will be able to enjoy(future tense)
2) In the morning, I will get up early and pray for God
: pray to God
3) After coming back home, I will take a breakfast with family reading a newspaper for korean residents.
: Korean
4) The menu of the Breakfast will be a fresh fish food and desert is fruit, such as mango, pineapple.
: dessert
5) After breakfast, I will talk about some interesting things
: something interesting
6) In the forenoon, I will enjoy a exciting hobby, such as swimming, reading, cultivating garden, refting, fishing, diving,~
: rafting
7) I can expect many hobby activities, which I couldn't do in Korea, there.
: I can expect many hobbies, which I can't do in Korea,
I'm not sure if commas on either side of relative clause can be put to separate antecedent and adverb
8) I will be familier with ~
: familiar
9) I can live there as complete philippian.
: a complete Filipino
10) In the evening, I will go shopping mall or take a relax watching TV.
: In the evening, I will go to shopping mall~
or In the evening, I will go shopping
11) At night, I will communicate relatives and friends
: At night, I will communicate with relatives and friends
12) Then, after praying for God, I will go to the bed.
: Then, after praying to God, I will go to bed.
13) It is a new challenge to live in other nation. But It is worth to challenge even though many expected difficulties, ~
: to challenge in spite of many difficulties to be expected
14) I expect life in Philippine as I can enjoy many spare time and abundant life that I can't have in Korea because of the economical reason.
: a lot of spare time~ economic reason.
15) It also looks like a rosy future.
: a little awkward for the last sentence.