Saturday, May 31, 2008

The cycle of water

The cycle of water

The earth has a limited amount of water. That water keeps going around and around. Water cycle is made up of a few main parts.
stage 1. Water turn to evaportion. Evaportion birth when the sun heat up water in rivers or lakes and sea. The water vapor or steam leaves the river, lake and sea and goes into the air.
stage 2. Water vapor changes to liquid again. Water vapor become cold in the air and changes into clouds by condensation.
stage 3. Water, such as snow, rain, drops from clouds to the ground. We call this situation a precipitation, which is a process in a chemical reaction which causes solid particles to become separated from a liquid. Precipitation is occured when so much water has been condensed that the air cannot hold on it anymore . The clouds get heavy and water falls back to the earth in the form of rain, hail, sleet or snow. It falling, soak the ground or become a part of the "ground water" that animals and plants can drink and become a part of the sea.
Water become evaporation, evaporation become cloud and cloud become water back. Even though the cycle is simple, it act as essential condition for lives of every animals and plants. This cycle of water is continued again anywhere as long as the earth exists. It is the unchangeable rule of nature which was made from creator of the earth.

1 comment:

Ha-Jeon Lim said...

I read pleasantly your writing about cycle of water because of shortest text.
I agreed with your opinions that it is very simple but inevitable for lives.
I found some mistakes in sentence so I will inform you it.
You should be careful of tense of verb. You need to look for following verb again.
- stage 1 : turn, birth
- stage 2 : become
- stage 3 : become, act
In stage 3, if you modify sentence, it is better than now.
- “Water, such as snow, rain,” : water such as snow and rain
- It falling, soak the ground or become a part of the "ground water" that animals and plants can drink and become a part of the sea.
I think that verb is omitted. Why don’t you change last “and” to “or” ?
I look forward to improving your English skill.