Saturday, May 24, 2008

Compare

comparing Korea and America

Comparing of Korea and America
Even though Korea and America is an closer ally than other nations, there are many difference.
First, there are geographical big differences. The area of America' land is too big than it of Korea' land. Population of America is also too big. On the contrary, Korea' population density is much higher than America. Because America' climate is on condition of farming better than Korea' it. America can produce as enormous agricultural products as amount we can't be imagine.
Second, there are differences on the culture. Counting numbers, Koreans count number bending fingers one by one, but Americans count number unbending fingers. Mothod of motioning in calling a person also is different each other. When people call a person, Koreans put palm toward lower part, Americans put palm toward the sky.
Last. there are differences on the level of people life. Many of people has told that America is the most comfortable country. America must be the strongest country, but in the point of real people's living it is different with what people has thought. Although there are many plutocrats in America, there is also many starving people who don't have ability to make a money. According to a formal announcement of America goverment, rate of those in America is over 10%. Average earning of Americans is even higher than that of Koreans.
Korea and America have many differences on the part of geograpy, culture, life. In addition there are many different things that isn't written. It is not easy to find same things between Korea and America. Until now, because America is too advanced nation in comparing with Korea, it can be meaningless to try to compare with each other. However, what is clear is that knowing difference of each other must be help to understand America.

1 comment:

Amy said...

1. I'm understanding about your comparing Korea and America. The topic sentence is a little short. but, body paragraphs and conclusion are well organized and your opinon of the campare.
2. you just write the difference without the similarity
3. I'd like to comment regarding some vague expressions.
#)your essey body, First
you should check to write the method of comparision. for exemple,

*Korea and America is an closer ally than
- Korea and America are closer than
*land is too big than
- land is bigger than
*density is much higher than America
- density is much higher than America's density
* "also too big. On the contrary "
After this sentence, you should better write contrary's expression
*America can produce as enormous agricultural products as
- America's agricultural products can produce as enormous as

Thanks for a job well done!

Good luck!!