Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Person who I respect

Ab. Lincoln is one of the persons who I honor. He was a president of America and left many achivements such as free the black from slave system.
Before he became a president, used to experince many failures. Even, he was in the mental institution for a while so because suffering was big. But he came over difficultys, had confidences to the right. After all, He became a president. When he saw the black had suffered many suffering, decided to abolish slave system. However, he was face of many opposites and had to suffer the war between the sourth and the north America. But his faith to the right was not shake, after all, he gift freedom to the black.
Because he did not surrender to actuality and practiced his confidences, I honor him.

2 comments:

Amy said...
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Amy said...

I intersing you essay to understing easily .
In sentence structure, I would like to divide the introduction and the conclution.
In genually, you write to use the time adverbial phrase well, but you should each sentence in order.
There are some misspelling, you should change.